Lord of the Flies
Ch #12
Perspective: Simon
It’s Okay
I sat there and watched what were they doing yet I could do nothing to stop the evil being committed here. It was excruciating and I knew this was coming the beast was us and it was let loose amongst my friends. I saw it eat away till it completely controlled them there was no going back there was no way back. Jack had taken over and now it was everyone against Ralph they were hunting him. He was alone and with no one to aid him he was vulnerable.
I saw that they had planned to cut off his head and put it on a stick just like the sow. I couldn’t watch what they wanted to do to him was disgusting I hope Ralph will be okay I do worry about him. Later I saw that samneric were exploiting the plan to Ralph then they blew his cover what were they up to. All of a sudden all of the savages had jumped out and chased Ralph as he made a dash for it. Then he was lost so jack said to burn the island in order for him to die or come out of hiding. After a while I worried about Ralph did he burn then he sprung from the creepers and kept running.
They all chased him until they all came face to face with a naval officer he said he would take them home. I felt I sign of relief it was all over, they’re going home.
I saw that they had planned to cut off his head and put it on a stick just like the sow. I couldn’t watch what they wanted to do to him was disgusting I hope Ralph will be okay I do worry about him. Later I saw that samneric were exploiting the plan to Ralph then they blew his cover what were they up to. All of a sudden all of the savages had jumped out and chased Ralph as he made a dash for it. Then he was lost so jack said to burn the island in order for him to die or come out of hiding. After a while I worried about Ralph did he burn then he sprung from the creepers and kept running.
They all chased him until they all came face to face with a naval officer he said he would take them home. I felt I sign of relief it was all over, they’re going home.
2 comments:
I like that you used different and more vocablary that is more advanced than the basic ones I usually use. I can see that you really got into the book and represented yourself as the charater, which in this case Simon. I can see that you really got in to the book and understood it.
I like that you cover everything in the chapter in a short story but still keep the chapter true. I liked how you talk about how Jack took over the whole island.
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