Lord of the flies
The Pig
Huh ever since that stupid pig got away everyone’s been hassling me about how I was to afraid to kill it. Don’t you worry next time next time I’ll get him. The only thing I hate more than being challenged is being told that I do no good. Today Ralph got all in my face about how I didn’t bring home a stupid pig. Then after I said I was going to go hunt some more he said to help make the shelters. It's not like it's easy I listened carefully for the castanet sound of the pigs hooves. Not only that but the creepers made everything so opaque it was like hunting at night. I already have enough vicissitudes I don't need anymore coming from him. As if I haven’t been doing a lot lately we need meat, it’s a very important necessity.
We went the first few days just fine without shelter, I think that the food is more important. All we have been eating so far is rotting fruit and I’m pretty sure that that’s not enough, besides you can become ill. I'm just looking out for what’s best for the community. Ralph just doesn’t understand that. Especially Simon he just keeps kissing up to the leader he’s a very queer boy, so contrite so innocent .
I wonder where he ran off to. No matter I will avenge myself they’ll See when I bring back a feast I'll attack that animal with enormous compulsion. They’ll see…
3 comments:
You didn't put who you are and what chapter it was and all that stuff. But after I figured out that it was Jack, I liked it. It was funny, and you used the vocabulary words very well. I think you portrayed Jack really well because you showed how frustrated he was with Ralph and that he was frustrated with himself because he couldn't catch any of the pigs that were on the island. good job, carly
I loved how you really had a good description how you were jack. I could tell by the way you wrote about jack i could really tell that Jack is angry because he didn't kill the pig. You used most of the vocabulary words. It was very enjoyable to read. good job [= - alan goco
You had good information to show, the vocabulary was awesome. I liked how you showed the frustation that jack had and I could picture that in my head which is really cool.
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